Initial Idea

my initial idea is for the film to be about 3 men linked by one woman, they were all married to the woman and were all individually beaten by her, the start of my film will have the 3 men sat around a table something, you wont hear what they are saying as music will be played over the top but you will be able to see they are talking, it will then go to a close up of the first man and pause and titles will go above his head saying husband 1, it will then go to a flashback of when the man was married to the woman and how she hurt/affected him, i will then repeat the process of titles above each man and a flash back for all of 3 of them, after the flashbacks have finished i will have the men talking around the table again discussing how to get back at the woman, the process of the film will show how evil the woman is so you empathise with the male characters, after the scene around the table there will be a cut to the men confronting the woman and a fight ensuing with the men victorious and thus the revenge being complete, due to the violence in this short film i will use camera angles to imply violence rather than show it full on.

i may have to edit the ending depending on audience perception to my pitch however i would like to keep the main base of the film and the opening scenes.